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8. Juni 2009
I turned 22 today and my bf said, I should upload this because it looks great. So here it is! "The days of mourn are pass All sorrow aside I finally arrived No longer sick of shining - no longer scared of burning The world has silenced The voices are gone Found relief, salvation Quit the downward spiral Sad years, bygone Future - the brightest white" Critiques and suggetions are very welcome!!! Featured: [link] Stock   __________________________________________________________________ Copyright © Ilse Karner Do not reproduce, copy, edit, publish, transmit or upload my work in any way without my written permission! Thank you. Comments
 i'm not exactly the person who likes pink but this is very good
  love it...
-- Hard Work Hard Play  awesome
 -- -strangle me up inside of you-  Happy birthday :]
-- I did a shit on your shit Irony completed ©  This is SO cute!
This is just what I wanted to see done with this! I love the piiiink! <3  Such a beautiful photo
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At the first glance, I'd to say that landscape looks very nice, the sky seems powerfull as well as the herbs, yet something's wroung on the bottom, your model seems bad-incrusted, indeed we should also see some herbs behind her. The girl and especially the ballons got it wroung too because of the lightings which are behind her instead of being in front of, thus the ballons seems particulary way too bright in this scene.
Overall, I'd tell you it's pretty good : your cuttout is proper and clear, you digged out those amazing stocks and both pictures are mixed up as well for delivering a powerful message wich is highlighted by the title : liberation, it makes me feel of freedom.
Finally, I'd say there are color troubles in your compositon, the quiet and peacefull cold field doesn't match with the aggressiveness of your pink-dressed lady, it looks simply looks weird or unatural in my opinion!
So, my critique is up! I
Keep up working on your great works :]
Leih.
Was Fotomanilpulationen angeht, hab ich selbst auch nicht so die Ahnung. Hab mich damals mehr dafür interessiert und auch selbst welche gemacht (sind auch noch welche in meiner Galerie).. Ich hoffe, ich werde dir trotzdem mit der Kritik helfen können.
Insgesamt find ich, dass es eine sehr schöne Idee ist und auch ganz gut umgesetzt wurde.
Beim nächsten Mal musst du aufpassen, dass du vielleicht noch ein bisschen präziser ausschneidest. Man sieht, dass die Frau nicht wirklich zum Bild dazugehört, vor allem vorn im Gras ist das deutlich zu erkennen. Das sollte man möglichst vermeiden. Beim nächsten Mal würd ich einfach das Gras nochmal als eine Ebene vor der Model-Ebene setzen und da dann noch son bisschen wegradieren, so dass man die Beine nur ein bisschen durchschimmern sieht (wenn du verstehst, wie ich meine
Den Lichteffekt an den Ballons find ich superschön.
Auch das weiße Kleid und die Strümpfe zu verfärben, ist dir sehr gut gelungen.
Wie gesagt, insgesamt ist es eine sehr schöne Manipulation. Und Übung macht den Meister!
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